# Draft feedback practice card

Choose one passage and invite an intended reader to try it. Record their actual response before deciding what to change.

- Date:
- Draft and version:
- Intended reader:
- Passage or step selected:
- What the reader should be able to do:
- My one main question:
- Actual response / first sticking point:
- What was clear and should stay:
- Original wording:
- Revised wording:
- Follow-up date and answer to the same question:
- Next step: keep / add one missing detail / check with another intended reader

Completion: one actual response, one corresponding revision and one follow-up record. Leave unanswered fields blank.